How is this story, called The Drive Home, I wrote?

Okay, I'm not trying to be mean, but your story is just confusing. You start talking about friends, and then they crash, and then everyone is zombies. I kind of get what you are trying to say, but most of your story sounds like you don't really know where you are going with it. You also need to use spell check, because somewhere in there you said "Soupier" but you meant "Superior". It was just really confusing.